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An Email to Uncle John Hi Uncle John,How are you ? Thank you for your email. I am glad to hear that you have visited many places in the past two months. I am especially interested in the interesting things that you wrote to me about your travelling in africa. It is amazing.Surely in Hong Kong there are... 顯示更多 An Email to Uncle John Hi Uncle John, How are you ? Thank you for your email. I am glad to hear that you have visited many places in the past two months. I am especially interested in the interesting things that you wrote to me about your travelling in africa. It is amazing. Surely in Hong Kong there are also many interesting and re- laxing places for you to visit. I will lead you the waay if you come to Hong Kong. If you come to Hong Kong, you can visit Tsim Sha Tsui in Kowloon. There is a good place for sightseeing. There are three museums to visit and play. You can visit Repulse Bay too. It is on Hong Kong Island.You can visit the Repulse Bay Beach. You can swim and have a sunbath there. On the other hand, Aberdeen is on Hong Kong Island and there is many seafood to eat. You can eat delicious seafood at Jumbo Floating Restaurant. If you come to Hong Kong. You will find more interesting places to visit and play there. I hope you can visit Hong Kong once. Hope to see you again and keep in touch! Love, Peter

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Hi Uncle John, How are you ? Thank you for your email. I am glad to hear that you have visited many places last two months. I especially want to know the interesting things that you wrote to me about your travelling in africa.It is amazing.In Hong Kong there are also have many interesting and relaxing places for you to visit.If you come to Hong Kong,I will share some of the intersting places for you to visit.If you interest to visit the museums,you can go to Tsim Sha Tsui.There have three museums for you to visit.If you like to swim,you can also go to Repulse Bay Beach. Aberdeen is on Hong Kong Island now.If you like to eat seafood,you should come.Cause there have many seafood Restaurant and i like that was pretty good. I extremely want you to visit me. Hope you can visit Hong Kong.See you latter and keep in touch. 希望可以幫到你:)

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